Move over, DaVinci Code. It's time for the DaVinci cover
letter
By Maria Hanson, LiveCareer
Leonardo DaVinci was the ultimate Renaissance man -- a genius by anyone's standards.
The Italian polymath excelled as a painter, sculptor, inventor, engineer, architect,
musician, scientist, mathematician, botanist, anatomist, and geologist.
Even nearly 500 years after his death, people are blown away by his achievements,
from the painting of the Mona Lisa to the invention of the helicopter.
But Leonardo di ser Piero Da Vinci had another, little-known talent up his paint-coated
sleeve: The man could write a killer cover letter.
Let's take a look at a letter he wrote in 1482 to Ludovico il Moro, the Duke of
Milan, when 30-year-old DaVinci was hungry for work. We asked headhunter Stephen
Viscusi, author of Bulletproof Your Job, and CEO of
Bulletproof your Resume, to provide his expert analysis of
DaVinci's letter and show
job-seekers what they can learn from this man of letters. (The full
translation of the letter follows.)
LiveCareer: First of all, is this document a cover letter or a
resume?
Stephen Viscusi: Actually, it's both. And it's perfect. He includes the personalized
element of a cover letter with
elements of a resume. More people today should consider morphing their cover
letters and resumes. Employers today get so many resumes they hardly have time to
read them.
LC: What do you think of the letter overall?
SV: DaVinci was clearly a creative genius even with this kind of task, because he
understood what not enough people today do: That bosses or companies want to sense
your loyalty, your ability to make them look good, and to protect them. The one
major theme seen throughout DaVinci's cover letter is that he has the boss's back.
Credentials and
qualifications are not as important.
LC: Most of DaVinci's letter describes all the ways he can help the duke in times
of war. He barely even mentions his
artistic talents. Here's a typical paragraph. What's the deal?
I will make covered chariots, safe and unattackable, which, entering among the enemy
with their artillery, there is no body of men so great but they would break them.
And behind these, infantry could follow quite unhurt and without any hindrance.
SV: The deal is that DaVinci knew the Duke was in the market for a military genius,
not an artistic genius at that time. He played to his audience – not necessarily
to his strengths. It's exactly what today's job seekers need to do. Be what someone
is looking for, and then become the person you said you were.
You can take a
career aptitude test to identify your strengths and find out how to use
this knowledge to get the right job for you.
LC: How would this paragraph translate in today's
job hunt:
I have a sort of extremely light and strong bridges, adapted to be most easily carried,
and with them you may pursue, and at any time flee from the enemy; and others, secure
and indestructible by fire and battle, easy and convenient to lift and place. Also
methods of burning and destroying those of the enemy.
SV: If DaVinci was in
information technology, it would read something like this: "I know how to
design software better than other people. It will sell. I am a low-maintenance employee.
I am good at multi-tasking and I take direction well. And I know how to knock out
the competition."
LC: The letter apparently worked. The Duke hired DaVinci. Are you surprised?
SV: Not at all. DaVinci told him exactly what he needed to hear, and then most certainly
followed through. I'm sure the Duke was very happy with his hire.
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Full Translation:
Most Illustrious Lord, Having now sufficiently considered the specimens of all those
who proclaim themselves skilled contrivers of instruments of war, and that the invention
and operation of the said instruments are nothing different from those in common
use: I shall endeavor, without prejudice to any one else, to explain myself to your
Excellency, showing your Lordship my secret, and then offering them to your best
pleasure and approbation to work with effect at opportune moments on all those things
which, in part, shall be briefly noted below.
1. I have a sort of extremely light and strong bridges, adapted to be most easily
carried, and with them you may pursue, and at any time flee from the enemy; and
others, secure and indestructible by fire and battle, easy and convenient to lift
and place. Also methods of burning and destroying those of the enemy.
2. I know how, when a place is besieged, to take the water out of the trenches,
and make endless variety of bridges, and covered ways and ladders, and other machines
pertaining to such expeditions
3. If, by reason of the height of the banks, or the strength of the place and its
position, it is impossible, when besieging a place, to avail oneself of the plan
of bombardment, I have methods for destroying every rock or other fortress, even
if it were founded on a rock, etc.
4. Again, I have kinds of mortars; most convenient and easy to carry; and with these
I can fling small stones almost resembling a storm; and with the smoke of these
cause great terror to the enemy, to his great detriment and confusion.
5. And if the fight should be at sea I have kinds of many machines most efficient
for offense and defense; and vessels which will resist the attack of the largest
guns and powder and fumes.
6. I have means by secret and tortuous mines and ways, made without noise, to reach
a designated spot, even if it were needed to pass under a trench or a river.
7. I will make covered chariots, safe and unattackable, which, entering among the
enemy with their artillery, there is no body of men so great but they would break
them. And behind these, infantry could follow quite unhurt and without any hindrance.
8. In case of need I will make big guns, mortars, and light ordnance of fine and
useful forms, out of the common type.
9. Where the operation of bombardment might fail, I would contrive catapults, mangonels,
trabocchi, and other machines of marvellous efficacy and not in common use. And
in short, according to the variety of cases, I can contrive various and endless
means of offense and defense.
10. In times of peace I believe I can give perfect satisfaction and to the equal
of any other in architecture and the composition of buildings public and private;
and in guiding water from one place to another.
11. I can carry out sculpture in marble, bronze, or clay, and also I can do in painting
whatever may be done, as well as any other, be he who he may. Again, the bronze
horse may be taken in hand, which is to be to the immortal glory and eternal honor
of the prince your father of happy memory, and of the illustrious house of Sforza.
And if any of the above-named things seem to anyone to be impossible or not feasible,
I am most ready to make the experiment in your park, or in whatever place may please
your Excellency - to whom I comment myself with the utmost humility, etc