Prove that you’ve researched the company and the role. Make this employer sound like your top choice without sounding desperate.
I’ve been in insurance for over 10 years, so I know you have the second biggest fraud investigation department in the state. I’ve had my sights set on your fraud unit ever since I got into insurance, and when I saw a position open up with your company, I applied immediately.
Discuss what you do best and how it will help the company.
I’m a great people person and I really want to interact with customers in a high-traffic, fast-paced environment. Your company fits right in with my strengths, and I know I could contribute to your team right away.